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Secudino Zansori



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PostSubject: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:16 am

Sealed Descrition Secudino doesn’t have actually have a sword, instead he only has gauntlets over his arms, these gauntalts are as strong as a unreleased sword, or a sealed sword, depending on your, idiom.

Release Phase. Grito (Scream)

Class-Type: Melee

Resurrección:
Enhancements:

Enhanced Speed – Secudino’s speed in ress is extremely fast, comparable to a normal espada without an enhancement, as such he is able to perform the same amount of Sonido as his Espada master, just due to his time around him.

Enhanced Cero/Bala – Secudino loves to use cero and bala, in fact those are the majority of his attacks, moves based around those two. As such, his cero and bala are the same in terms of a normal non-enchanced cero/bala of his Espada master.

Enhanced Regeneration - Secudino can regenerate limbs, his wings, as such a limb is 3-4, posts depending on arm or leg. Small cuts are one post, wounds deeper than a finger are 2 posts, internal organs are 6-10 posts depending on there function.

Resurrección Special Ability: Ojos de lince -Nothing more than fancy show to the outside world, however those eyes are not actually eyes at all, in fact they are reiatsu circuits that happen to be in the shape of eyes. The circuit conducts reiatsu in such a way that it speeds up reiatsu recovery, similar to a battery. Constantly charging, Secudino uses that “battery” for the simple of effect of lessening the strains of reiatsu usage. (All cool-downs halved)

Ultimate Ability:

Technique(s):

#1. [Release]
Name - Cero de Furia
Attributes: Damage, Increasing Damage*
Class: Reiatsu, Physical*, Instant
' By spreading his wings, Secudino can fire roughly 10 normal cero’s combined with his dust, these cero’s are similar to the way Starrk fired his, all in a simultaneous rate so the opponent has a harder time constantly dodging 10 normal Ceros. The dust amount is increased per the use of this skill. '
Post Durations: 1 post
Cooldown: 8 posts

#2. [Release]
Name - Ráfaga de plumas
Attributes: Invulnerable, Remove 'xxx’, Heal
Class: Strategic, Instant, Reiatsu*
' Secudino when hit, can transform into hundreds of thousands of small feathers that diverge from the point of impact and expand outward rapidly, in a flurry of dust*HINT* and beetle. Used either as a quick getaway, or to escape an attack, Secudino usually saves this for a last resort, reforming himself as needed, however it takes one entire post to reconstruct himself again afterwards. He only heals the damage done of the attack that forced him to use this move. '
Post Durations: 3
Cooldown: 6

#3. [Release]
Name - Chillido de Arpía
Attributes: Piercing Damage, Damage Reduction
Class: Strategic, Instant, Reiatsu*
' By flapping his wings, Secudino creates a huge dust devil of dust that expands outward in a raging dust devil, that homes in on the opponent. (Stays in the air for two posts unless blown away by a WIND based MOVE) The move will almost sandpaper an opponent which is where the piercing damage comes in, and also can be used to block weaker attacks, damage reduction'
Post Durations: 2 posts *Starts homing on the opponent on the first post*
Cooldown: 5


#4. [Sealed]
Name - Bala de Furia *Fury Bullet*
Attributes: Damage
Class: Reiatsu, Instant
' Due to his sealed sword being a gauntlet, Secudino can fire a barrage of bala’s that have combined with his dust at an opponent, must like Findor. However this is a technique and does not count towards the actual bala count, so in reality he can fire 15 bala’s at once per this technique '
Post Durations: 1
Cooldown: 4


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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:06 am

Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:15 am

Remove the "Afflcition" class/attribute from your damaging techniques as they are not an affliction. However, they are piercing. All else is approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:26 am

My dust makes them affliction

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Abilities: Cero, Gran Rey Cero, Sonido

PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:33 am

Definition of Dust: "fine, dry powder consisting of tiny particles of earth or waste matter lying on the ground or on surfaces or carried in the air"

-This does not make them affliction, but partial to physical.
-I also took the liberty of editing the classes for you.
-Delete 1 technique, as you are only allowed 3, unless the class type is Distance that is for the weapon.

-Please change the topic name to the name of your Zanpakutou, not the release call out.

-Also, the special ability is to halve cooldowns?

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:42 am

*Cough* My dust is my innate ability


As for melee sealed weapon

Melee-Type - All sealed weapons will be considered Melee-Type, meaning it will be normal range weapons made for close combat unless otherwise.
* When they are this class, Arrancars may place their reiatsu over the blade/weapon, increasing it's cutting power. This may also be used a small projectile to throw that concentrated reiatsu in any form of a wave. This can be treated as a technique and made into one with its own effect!

Distance do not get a effect... melee does

Bala -
is an Arrancar-exclusive technique that hardens the user's Reiatsu and releases it like a swift blast of spiritual energy.

Sounds like the exact same thing....

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:43 am

Yes, but the Melee takes up 1 of the 3 you have already. ^^

Distance gives its own effect, corresponding to what you want it to do. xP

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:50 am

Doesn't say that at all..... in fact it says right there

This may also be used a small projectile to throw that concentrated reiatsu in any form of a wave. This can be treated as a technique and made into one with its own effect!

Can be treated as a technique and made into one.... not that it takes up one.... but made into one

While I'm glad your so very clear.... very very clear

If its a issue change it to distance

If you can agree made into one means... made into one... then we are kosher

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:56 am

Wow, alright then. Sorry for not being clear. I'll go edit that in. -_-

It's not a issue to change it to distance, just follow to what is presented.

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:06 am

So... whats the verdict?

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:14 am

Remove the technique, unless you want it to take up a technique slot. =/

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:45 am

Done

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:27 am

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Sun Aug 08, 2010 8:42 am

K... so I'm an espada


Which means a few things change

and edits I would like to make

Tech that fire's cero's goes from 10 to 15 as requested by Aden

Also second technique needs the word and beetle taken out

First technique, dust does not increase, the amount of cero's increases per use of this technique

That is all for now

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PostSubject: Re: Grito (Scream)   Fri Aug 20, 2010 2:36 am

Ultimate Ability - Negación corrupta - Corrupted Denial

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>Negación corrupta< - ’ >Corrupted Denial< ’
Attributes: Invulnerable, Remove 'xxx', Reflect
Class: Strategic, Reiatsu, Control
' >The corrupted negacion is a personalized version of a Gillian's own hollow negacion, when used, a brown reiatsu covers the user, this reiatsu grants invincibility to any previous attacks done, and attacks done in the next 2 posts. Basically it takes moves that people attack, physical or reiatsu, and moves they do in the next two posts and negates them. It removes control user's have over there own attacks once they hit the brown reiatsu they are considered no longer under the user's control, this stems only into reiatsu based moves. The final part of this ability is to reflect attacks of a reiatsu based nature back at the opponent, and since its removed from there control, it no longer applies to there own stipulations. *Such as immunity to there own poison, or reiatsu, or own elemental based attacks* < '
Post Durations: Lasts 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 post cooldown

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