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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sat May 29, 2010 12:58 am | |
| Sealed DescritionThey are two wakizashi. One points up and the other down on the spine. So one of the blades is like Kakashi’s saber when he was young and another hangs upside down without falling out of the sheath. They are both identical to each other and are very light weight as they are styled to be deadly at close range and built for silence. However the picture says they are black but they are supposed to be a bright blue. They are 70cm long each just over the standard length. Release Phase: Yuki - Snow Manifestation:It takes the form of a white Yeti. It wears clothing too, just some cargo pants with arctic camouflage on them. He has marking on his face in a gold colour, like tribal tattoos. Class-Type:Projectile Family-Type:Ice Sub-Type" Unknown Shikai Description:   Both Wakizashi’s blades turn into little blades. These blades are destructible by high level Kido 50+ but can be reproduced by sheathing the Wakizashi and more will appear on the blade. These mini blades can be controlled by the mind, or hand gestures to speed them up. There are 6 blades from each Wakizashi making a total of 12 blades that are about 10cm wide each. The middle is bladed until Daizai gives a command and can split one of the blades to make trench knives (second picture) Shikai Special Ability: (2 Abilities for ice + projectile) The first ability allows the blades fire off beams of ice which are black. These beams are quite small about an inch wide but they are fired in between the blades. So it effectively makes a net of ice. This 'net' is not actually a net but since the 12 blades are connected by beams of ice it can form a net. Since the beams can only be fired from blade to blade this means they are all connected by beams of black ice. So if I had all twelve blades connected to each other they would have created a makeshift net of ice and blades. It does not have to take the form of a net as i could have six pairs of blades each having only one connection each. The beams travel at 10 meters a second or something similar to a Quincy bow shot. Slow enough to be avoidable, quick enough to make it hard to do so. On contact these beams start to freeze things rapidly, They are made out of reiatsu but when touching something it freezes quickly. So if a hand touched it for a second the arms can be frozen it only takes 3 turns of contact for a total capture/freeze two turns for a large covering and one turn for a limb, a simple touch will freeze half or quarter of a limb depending on the strength level since the beam is so quick. These beams cannot be shot normally, they must be in-between the 12 blades of the Zanpakuto. The ice beam is black and so is the ice created. The second ability is what the ice actually does. Not only does it freeze them but it absorbs Reiatsu from the object or person it is in contact with. So as well as a numbing and slowing effect the opponent is being drained by the ice. This allows it to freeze any substance it touches as the Reiatsu in the substance gives it the qualities so fire will lose its heat on contact acid will lose its burning qualities, of course big fires will eventually burn through but it takes longer than normal. The absorbed Reiatsu is not given to Daizai as he has not managed to harness this power yet. It is dispersed into the atmosphere when the ice is shattered or melted. Of course the ice will be melted if the ice is no longer part of the beam but the fire or heat will have a hard time doing so as the ice will still be draining. This ice can be used to lessen attacks but the beams must be focused on it for them to freeze and weaken it fully. The Reiatsu in the ice quickens the spread of other ice and reinforces its own strength. Technique(s):[Shikai] Name – Burizādobīmu – Blizzard beam Attributes: Damage, Piercing damage, Affliction Class:Physical ' The user gathers the miniature blades and forms a circle with them. They then each emit a dark aura and after each one lights up and beam equivalent to the size of the circle is fired. The beam maximum size is two meters wide. It is a 'laser style of attack but is partially spiky so it is not just a cylinder of ice. It is rough and spiky, similar to Ruikia's second dance. This allows for piercing damage and freezing. The ice carries the second ability'Post Durations: The ice stays until melted, it can be fired in one post. Cooldown: 1 use then 3 posts cooldown Bankai is not yet available (I.E in progress) I will be happy to make any edits for you.
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Rebecca Seitz La Segunda Espada

Points: 1531 Reputation: 11 Join date: 2010-03-17 Age: 17 Location: Canada
Character sheet Abilities: Sonido, Bala, Cero Oscuras, Gemilios Sonido, Gonzui, Negacion, Custom Cero, Grand Rey Cero, Resurrecction, Cero
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sat May 29, 2010 9:24 am | |
| Remove the special gel in the base of the handle.
Your sub type Cannot be Kido, If you read our Zanpakuto rules carefully you would see that Kido is not a option. There is dual weild however and your Shikai gives you two gauntlets, so change your sub-type to dual weild.
Your special ability needs some work...Where do I begin. ok if this dark energy curropts them then you have to be very specific on it. How much reiatsu is destroyed? does it affect Elites differently It has to wear off, you can't insta death someone like that especially when your a unseated officer now. I need a better overall description to your ability. Set some limitations on it,
You aren't allowed to have bankai yet until you pay for it. So, ya, no rush there for you. _____________________________________ |
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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sat May 29, 2010 9:45 am | |
| Edited, thanks for looking at this.
I have made the ability more clear, i had wanted to before but i found it hard to think of drawbacks. Can i upgrade the power if i got to a captain's level? Or do Zanpakuto's stay the same in power? |
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Rebecca Seitz La Segunda Espada

Points: 1531 Reputation: 11 Join date: 2010-03-17 Age: 17 Location: Canada
Character sheet Abilities: Sonido, Bala, Cero Oscuras, Gemilios Sonido, Gonzui, Negacion, Custom Cero, Grand Rey Cero, Resurrecction, Cero
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sat May 29, 2010 9:58 am | |
| your zanpakuto would stay the same, you would have to buy ability upgrades and such to strengthen your zan.
if this only kills off reiatsu then how come large wounds kill off organs? _____________________________________ |
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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sat May 29, 2010 9:59 am | |
| Oh shit! Sorry making edits, I made the mistake of thinking by killing off reiatsu i killed of the body, silly me. |
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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sat May 29, 2010 8:43 pm | |
| Ok it has been edited. You may say OP but how often am I going to hit someone. Since there are no techniques I think it is quite balanced. |
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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sun May 30, 2010 2:35 am | |
| Update, I asked the captain of the 2nd Division for a seated position and he allowed me to be a thrid seat. Hopefully my seat now reflects my position. |
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Major Rico Former 2nd Division Member

Points: 892 Reputation: 8 Join date: 2010-03-22 Location: Antarctica
Character sheet Abilities: Decapitations, Fraternizations, Mutilations, Celebration, Calibration, Multiplication, Notation, Capitalization, Alliteration, Recommendation, Domination, Animation, Sensation, Destination.
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sun May 30, 2010 7:57 am | |
| Fine fine, stamped. Remember, it has to HIT someone to effect them, and a Zanpakuto doesn't count for rotting. |
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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sun May 30, 2010 11:07 pm | |
| Ok i have changed the idea sorry for any inconveniece  |
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Ichijou Vizard Leader

Points: 1472 Reputation: 10 Join date: 2010-04-07 Age: 18 Location: Read my post...
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 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sun May 30, 2010 11:35 pm | |
| they are fired in between the blades. So it effectively makes a net of ice.
Please write this in clearer detail. Between what blades? the 12 little flying blades? What color is the beam itself? how fast does it travel? can the ice flowers be melted? With what? etc
Your technique Ice attak is not a class... Once again detailed writing you have made a circle and shoots a beam. Is the Beam a round disc? is it just a lazer like shot? After the edits and additions we will further review your zanpakuto. |
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Ichijou Vizard Leader

Points: 1472 Reputation: 10 Join date: 2010-04-07 Age: 18 Location: Read my post...
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 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sun May 30, 2010 11:50 pm | |
| Change it to one use then 3 posts cool down of yours for your technique please. |
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Ichijou Vizard Leader

Points: 1472 Reputation: 10 Join date: 2010-04-07 Age: 18 Location: Read my post...
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 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Sun May 30, 2010 11:57 pm | |
| Much better, anyone else? -APPROVED |
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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:22 am | |
| I wish to change my first ability and make my ice beams the primary wth this as an add-on to that.
Changed from - Making a 2 inch in diameter flower which retricts movement. The second ability is what the ice actually does. Not only does it freeze them but it absorbs Reiatsu from the object or person it is in contact with. So as well as a numbing and slowing effect the opponent is being drained by the ice. This allows it to freeze any substance it touches as the Reiatsu in the substance gives it the qualities so fire will lose its heat on contact acid will lose its burning qualities. The absorbed Reiatsu is not given to Daizai as he has not managed to harness this power yet. It is dispersed into the atmosphere when the ice is shattered or melted. Of course the ice will be melted if the ice is no longer part of the beam but the fire or heat will have a hard time doing so as the ice will still be draining. This ice can be used to lessen attacks but the beams must be focused on it for them to freeze and weaken it fully. The Reiatsu in the ice quickens the spread of other ice and reinforces its own strength
And some asthetic changes to the blades, I assume i can do it since i have not ICly released yet. |
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Ichijou Vizard Leader

Points: 1472 Reputation: 10 Join date: 2010-04-07 Age: 18 Location: Read my post...
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 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:52 am | |
| -Approved.
Though Most fires will eventually burn the ice silly. Such as Kazumi's, Hisoka's, Shuei.. etc big fires. |
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Lucas

Points: 861 Reputation: 0 Join date: 2010-05-26 Age: 17
 | Subject: Re: Mō fubuki - Blizzard Fri Jul 16, 2010 6:40 am | |
| I have placed the edit into the main application thankyou for your time Ichi! |
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